Smoking should be iIlegal

In the last few weeks Rimu have been learning to write speeches. My speech is about how smoking should be illegal. The reason I chose my topic is that  I think smoking is a horrible habit that  must be stopped. I was focusing on persuasive writing and showing my listener that smoking should be illegal and why. My favourite bit about writing my speech was presenting it in front of the class. The thing I think I did the best was looking up when I was presenting. The thing I think should work on was doing more hand movements and being a bit louder. Otherwise I think I did really well on my speech and I can not wait till next year speeches.