The not so fun day
One day I was walking along the footpath then all of a sudden the ground started to crack. I tried to run away but a branch grabbed my ankle and pulled me down then everything went black. I woke up on a dirty old rock covered in moss. I immediately hopped off and brushed my dress and yelled out a scream. I heard little foot steps coming towards me. Then I looked down to see a little girl who was crying. "Hi" the little girl mumbled as a tear drop ran down her face. "Can you help me I'm lost?" I had no reply.
Then she said "can you please answer me". "Sorry I said". I did not mean to day dream. Okay how did you get here? I said. She said that she got grabbed and got pulled by a vine and got thrown in a hole it was scary. What about you? she said same I said. Come on let's go try and find a why out of this place I yelled as I ran to a gate as she followed along with me. Come on I yelled open as the little girl sat on the ground. So can we play hid and seek the little girl yelled. No I replied in angery voice. "why the little girl replied"?"because you said you needed help not playing hide and seek"! Sorry she said in a sad vioce."I do not even know your name I yelled"! Lucy she mumbled."I am Oliva I said nice to meet you come on lets go Lucy now".
"Finally"I said "where home not on anther plant". Lucy craked up laughing. "So where your house"? "right over there she". pointed to a lovley green house whith big windose. "okay bye" I yelled as I walked to my house "what a day I can not wait to tomorrow".
What a fascinating story. Your writing is evocative and leaves me wondering about the rich lives or your characters. You have managed to combine whimsy and menace. Are you planning any further adventures for these characters? I love the way you have combined direct speech with descriptive writing. I look forward to your next blog past.
ReplyDeleteThank Mr Robertson that was a very nice thing to say thanks for the povstie coment
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