Why Sport is more important than music
This week Rimu did their Easttle writing test I had to write about Why music is better than sport you had the pick to agree with the statement or disagree. I decided to disagree, I found this E-asttle difficult because I felt I couldn't be as creative as I wanted to be I'm not that good at persuasive writing. Have you done a E-asttle? Comment down below if you have! Please give me some feedback on this post
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Hi My name is Bree and I’m going to explain to you why I disagree with the statement that Music is more important than sport. Even though I love listing to music I strongly believe that sport is more important than music and it needs to be encouraged by parents and schools so that kids will have a healthy body and mindset and will perform better at school and everyday activities.
Sport is known to be a coping method for anxiety or depression 96% percent out of hundred patients from St Gorge
Hospital struggling with anxiety or depression have proven this.
Sports will ensure you have a healthy mindset and body and you will have more energy throughout the day.
Kids and teenagers also need to be off their technology more and need to be more active instead of being cooped up
inside on their phones or tablets.
Hospital struggling with anxiety or depression have proven this.
Sports will ensure you have a healthy mindset and body and you will have more energy throughout the day.
Kids and teenagers also need to be off their technology more and need to be more active instead of being cooped up
inside on their phones or tablets.
Since many primary and high schools are providing technology for education purpose children need to have more exercise and
schools could do that by having a longer P.E session. Teachers should also have to participate in P.E
so they have a good mindset for when they are in class.
schools could do that by having a longer P.E session. Teachers should also have to participate in P.E
so they have a good mindset for when they are in class.
Sports also allows you to be creative for example dance because you can express yourself but still be healthy at
the same time but many other sports can help you express yourself. Sports can also help you have a good career for example
you could be a famous athlete or be a famous fitness blogger.
There are too many other careers sports can give you but you don’t have to be good at sports to enjoy it.
the same time but many other sports can help you express yourself. Sports can also help you have a good career for example
you could be a famous athlete or be a famous fitness blogger.
There are too many other careers sports can give you but you don’t have to be good at sports to enjoy it.
In conclusion it must be obvious that sport is more important than music. Sports helps you with anxiety or depression it also ensures that you will have a good mindset and a healthy body. You can also get amazing opportunities from sport which can help with a career. Sports is more important than music.
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