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Tuesday, November 1, 2016

100 word challenge


This is my 100 word challenge.

As the smoked slowly cleared,  I saw a strange light coming from my house I was  the only one home mum was still out getting dinner maybe she is home already I guess I should go see I ran towards the door and pushed it open the house was empty maybe she was in bed. I better go get some sleep I walked towards my bedroom and pushed the door open I found a girl standing the corner of my room with black hair that flooded her face and a  she stared at me the corner of her eye I ran out to my room and to the door I rushed outside grabbed my keys and started to drive towards the shop. Mum’s walking out of the shop and towards her car. “Wait” I  yelled.

2 comments:

  1. I would love to know what the strange light was? Was it emanating from the black haired girl or from somewhere or someone else? i must admit to a great sense of relief that the mother in the story was ok. I admire your sense of imagination and I like the way I am left with many things to think about. Your imagination has sparked my imagination and that is the mark of a great writer.

    I look forward to our next blog post.

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  2. Thank you Mr Robertson I really enjoy the hundred
    word challenge I love how people appreciate my writing.Thank you for commenting on my blog

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